Wikipedia:Peer review/Kowloon Motor Bus/archive1
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Well, This article had grown into some length. However, there are certainly a lot of information that could be added, or rearranged. Ideas? --XF95.邪 03:02, 15 Apr 2005 (UTC)
- It seems fine, apart for the presence of a Cleanup template and this comment down in the history section: "could anyone give an exact year for that Victory and Jubilant? Is that 1982"... The later should probably go on the Talk page. With this level of detail, though, I expect the page will become outdated at some point and I'm not sure it will always be promptly maintained. So you may want to take that into consideration. — RJH 02:42, 17 Apr 2005 (UTC)